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Friendly tales it does speak softly to me
Softly chosen words to be spoken in time
Churning rhythm and elliptical faith
Knowing not of life nor death
Not of purpose nor of beauty
But beauty it holds most sincere
To those that view its passing
Particulate reflection set afire unto no more
Lives endless captured by unseeing eyes
But what of reason or logic
Of passion bright with an inner depth
Most bold
Most familiar
It does speak softly to me
Softly spoken revolutions
Rising up against the horizon
Until rise no more a star does fall
Comet chaser once before
Comet chaser forever more
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~Manigran May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
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=Bonvallet May 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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~Manigran May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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Mood: Love ~AloiseBrennan May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm going to blame my muddled just-woken-up brain for garbling through reading this and not entirely taking in any cognitive meaning, but in the end I was really impressed. What hit me first was the style of your wording. If a comet spoke like you and I, I would imagine it actually talking in that fashion. It gives complete thoughts, and they are highly intelligent thoughts, but it only uses the choice words of its comments. Nothing too extra, and it's so busy flying by that saying any other needless words would cause people to lose its message before it is finished delivering it. Does that make any sense?

In any case, this is awesome :D
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=Bonvallet May 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Haha, well my muddled sleep-deprived mind is what ended up writing this, so it's best enjoyed either waking up or about to crash. Thank you so much for the in depth comment :3
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~AloiseBrennan May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :) I tend to go in depth on things that weren't in mind for the artist, but I'm glad you appreciate it.
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