Friendly tales it does speak softly to me Softly chosen words to be spoken in time Churning rhythm and elliptical faith Knowing not of life nor death Not of purpose nor of beauty But beauty it holds most sincere To those that view its passing Particulate reflection set afire unto no more Lives endless captured by unseeing eyes But what of reason or logic Of passion bright with an inner depth Most bold Most familiar It does speak softly to me Softly spoken revolutions Rising up against the horizon Until rise no more a star does fall Comet chaser once before Comet chaser forever more
I'm going to blame my muddled just-woken-up brain for garbling through reading this and not entirely taking in any cognitive meaning, but in the end I was really impressed. What hit me first was the style of your wording. If a comet spoke like you and I, I would imagine it actually talking in that fashion. It gives complete thoughts, and they are highly intelligent thoughts, but it only uses the choice words of its comments. Nothing too extra, and it's so busy flying by that saying any other needless words would cause people to lose its message before it is finished delivering it. Does that make any sense?
Haha, well my muddled sleep-deprived mind is what ended up writing this, so it's best enjoyed either waking up or about to crash. Thank you so much for the in depth comment :3
In any case, this is awesome